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Not based on anyone, or anything in particular, I made it up as I went along. Plus I really love this song <3 I would've liked to have found a version which sounded MORE like the piano, than a keyboard. But that's just my preference, because I can tell the difference between the two 
I know there are lots of other things that could be improved on... So if you point them out, I MAY change things, depends on how I feel
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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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It tells the story, you get the emotion but all it needs is a bit of polish to make it superb. For example, set the length of the animation to the length of the music. I had to sit and watch "Replay?" for 30 seconds because I wanted to hear the end of the song. The easy way to fix this is slow the animation down but don't change anything else. You fit quite a bit of story in less than 1 minute; by lengthening the animation you have more time to bond with the characters.
Like I said, little things like that and it would raise the level from "captivating" to "enraptured". Seriously, try and prove me wrong...
I DID want to try to fit the story into the 2+ minutes of the song but at the time couldn't think of much more to add. And I didn't want to make the animations to go too slowly either xD So I might make some of the animations go on for a bit longer, but I'll probably only bring myself to add a few seconds.
When I do add to it, I'll update it
great work